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The BeginnerMina was lying in front of the tv, just surfing
through the channels, bored out of her mind.

"Gabe said he's going to call," she huffed.
"Really, sometimes I wonder why do I bother
with him. Sure, I've been taking care of him
ever since I bailed him out. I really should
force him to move in. That way, I could.."
she ranted on, before she heard the phone ring.

Grabbing it anxiously, she was about to start
in a flirtatious tone, but changed to her normal
tone when she realized who the other person was.

"Hey, Luther. What's up?" she began.

"Can you do me a favor?" he asked.

"What is it?" she sighed.

"Well, you see," he started, "there's th
Kneel Before Your QueenCan you kneel before your Queen, a bloody red lie upon your lips?
Take her hand soft as cream, and kiss the ruby she stole?
Listen to the sigh's of her ladies, close your eyes to the sound of a turning lock.
Know that now is your last chance, your last hope for escape - once it's past, you'll be there forevermore.

So kneel at your Queen's feet with that burning dark lie sewn to your lips,
Kiss her rubied finger as she whispers her guilty rights in her own head.
May the ladies sigh's condemn you, may the click of the lock deafen you.
Know that you'll be here forevermore, your heart tick tick ticking away your time.
Sunset of Betrayal :: Chapter VICHAPTER VI

Wolf-eyes Keitel stumbled into the back room and almost fell on Daisy. When Daisy saw him, he could tell her spirits had lifted. But then she saw Carraway enter the room behind him and she started backing away in shock.

“Wha―What’s he doing here?” she stammered fearfully. “Why are you here?”

Keitel turned to face Carraway, and found him looking stony-faced at Daisy.

“I knew it,” he said softly. “Before, there was a small part of me that wanted to believe I was mistaken, but now that I see you here, I am certain beyond the shadow of a doubt.”

Carraway abruptly lifted h
The DebtThe Debt

"Aw, look at her widdle hands and feet," Mina cooed over Britt, pinching her
cheeks and making faces at her.

"Where's Kate?" Gabriel asked.

"She's taking a nap," I replied, taking Britt from Mina's arms. "She's quite
energetic, apparently, she kept her on her toes all day."

"Well, that's one reason we won't have any kids soon," Gabe replied.

"Suits me. I'm just enjoying our relationship for now. 'Enjoy' being the
operative word," Mina grinned.

Gabe grinned back, somewhat sheepishly.

"So, uh...how come she doesn't have Kate's other features?" asked Mina.

"Well, apparently they don't fully develop until she's a year old, but s
The Landing of Ufeln: Chapter 1. DarknessThe cabin was full of whispers and murmuring. Children clung close to mothers and grandmothers, as the freezing seawater bit through their clothes. A baby wailed forlornly, the shrill sound standing out over the sea of hushes. The boat rocked, knocking Ryan blindly into the bulkhead he rested on. The pain woke him, into a world of darkness and dancing stars, tiny spots so empty as to be white. He grunted and rubbed the back of his head with the one free hand, while the other remained clamped over the cloth he had wrapped himself in. It was bloodless at least, but the small spot continued to throb. His vision slowly cleared, leaving only hazy
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The Family Diaries. Copyright ©2013 by Kathra W. All rights reserved. No part of this book may be used or reproduced in any manner whatsoever without permission by the author. :bulletred: This story is published, so don't even try

The cover photos were not taken by me. Though altered some, I won't take credit for them

Novel Chapter Order: Nina P.1, Aaron & Lance P.1, Tick & Burk, Ray, Tick's Explosive Romance, Nina P.2, Aaron & Lance P.2, Aaron, and then a bonus Ray chapter.

Alright, well this is the first half of my second chapter in Diaries. Once again, I separate them in order to not throw too much at you guys. My submissions will go in novel order.

Personally, I like Aaron & Lance's story more than Nina's part one. I guess it's just something about the boys being so young and how the reader gets to see a little of their background on how quickly they became friends.

Also, if you have not read The Family, you may not get some of the insiders within these chapters. So you can go read that if you want, here: [link] But, again, you don't have to. It'll just make Diaries more interesting :rose:

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Critique by ~imdangel Feb 12, 2013, 6:33:11 AM
Hello! I'd like how the originality of the story blends in the real world -- at some sort. ^^"
Though, one thing I've noticed, some parts of your story lines are almost cut, but somehow it's okay. I really noticed how you're very easy to write these words since all of the kids these days are easy to socialize. :)
I like Lance's story since it revolves around him, and if you may, I'd like to ask this: How did Lance got his power in the first place? Does his parents have one?
Sorry. I'm just curious, I guess you would probably answer my question at the next part of the story.
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*KiyonoMiona Feb 26, 2013  Student Writer
Having read most the others before this one (ending with Ray and seein' Lance's fireness fer the first time that led me here), fire user seems random to me lol. But I like it. Also, I do believe you're getting better with your writing. Your more recent chapters sound better than this one does. :) Keep it up.
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Mood: Adoration *KathraW Feb 26, 2013
I'm so glad there's been improvement in my writing ^^ That makes me feel so much better about the one I'm currently working on :heart:

His 'fireness' does seem random if you haven't read the first novel :XD: But I promise you, it's sort of a main part of the story line :P

Thank you :tighthug:
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*KiyonoMiona Feb 26, 2013  Student Writer
It was random 'cause I read normal people first lol. I know it's part of the main plot, it just seemed sudden to me 'cause I read him last. :)
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*KathraW Feb 26, 2013
"Normal People" :XD: I don't think any of them would be considered normal, haha. Even Tick is a 12 year old pyrotechnic :P

But yes, I understand where you're coming from :nod:

If you want to, I can give you links that explain his ability more from the first novel. That way you have a better understanding :rose:
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*KiyonoMiona Feb 26, 2013  Student Writer
I'm workin' my way through it right now, so not necessary. :)
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*KathraW Feb 26, 2013
Oh, well that works too :XD:
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~AlexRider-00Nothing Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha yeah. . .i was like, oh, look. . .Alex. . . haha..

I would have loved to read your story but the computer i am on wont' let me view it :)
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*KathraW Feb 13, 2013
Alex?

Try to download the PDF file ^-^
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~AlexRider-00Nothing Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
He's the second guy in your picture. . .on the lower half of the photograph. Alex Pettifyer, though i can't swear that is how you spell his last name. He played in Stormbreaker and I am number 4
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*KathraW Feb 13, 2013
Ah, yes :XD: I had to look up the model's name after your first comment

He just resembled my character Aaron so much, that I had to use it. I thought it would be fun to use real life reference photos for my readers instead of having the same cover photo for each new chapter. :rose:
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